Rebirth of the Phoenix , new piece

[Bessinnox]

Hi,

this is my new piece, just tell me what do you think about it
Thank you

Seb

REBIRTH OF THE PHOENIX (http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=433066)

click on the hi-fi link

http://roverabdeslam.canalblog.com/albums/photos_d_anthologie/m-phenix.jpg

[Neilfactory]

Good atmosphere start at 1.48 sec.I like this moment...

Percussions are nice.

Great stuff Seb.

>Neil.

[Beach]

Absolutely great stuff, Bessinox!!!!

I really like your writing...

Best regards to you,
Roberto

[Bessinnox]

merci Neil , I learn each day and try to understand that music is also good with an ambiance instead of a melodic stuff.

grazie Roberto per le tue parole.

but noone have something to say that is negative ??? :D

[Neilfactory]

Yes>


Too short.

>Neil.

[Bessinnox]

which part is too short ?????

thanks

[Neilfactory]

All! :D

[tchoyy]

Hi bessinox,

beautiful demo, I like it.

But....(hehe, that's what you're waiting for :D )
IMHO, it may be too repetitive, you should vary the orchestration so that we wouldn't get this "repetitive feeling".

Just my 2 cents.

[korg]

:eek: hi


imposing!!!!!!!


:eek:


very , splendid


cheer

[Bessinnox]

thank you both for your advices but what is the meaning of IMHO ?:o


and yes I try not to repeat the theme but it's not easy it comes slowly ( try to compare my old composition )

[Bessinnox]

thank you KORG

[tchoyy]

thank you both for your advices but what is the meaning of IMHO ?:o

IMHO = In My Humble Opinion :p

[Bessinnox]

ok thank you tchoyy

[Ecliptic]

Hi Seb,

Good track.
I prefer the second part (from 1:48). There is a beautiful melody and it's more cinematic than the first one.
I think you sholuld work on the tempo changes that are a bit unnatural.
I think also that, in the second part, the percussion's level is a bit too hig and, sorry, but I don't like the hi hat that plays all along.

Cheers

[Bessinnox]

I think you sholuld work on the tempo changes that are a bit unnatural.

yes it's unatural ( from 90 to 10 at then end ) but I like this vomiting ambiance :D just like if your were in a F14 tomcat going from Mach 1 to an ejection....

I think also that, in the second part, the percussion's level is a bit too hig and, sorry, but I don't like the hi hat that plays all along.

my earing is altered by the fact that I always listen to my track then it's difficult to be his own judge so thank you for your remark I'll try to adjust the percussion and I think that you're right.

thank you ecliptic

[Kayamb]

Salut Seb!

I like the percs, they are very crispy. However I think the brass in the 1st part are a bit too "weak" and deserve to get more punch to fit in to the dark atmosphere.

Lol, just in the middle of the comment, I was attacked by a spider, on my leg. For real, no kidding:) I had to get rid of it before I keep on writing my comment... lol

Here we go...

I really like when it accelerates in the end, but I would have made it accelerate even more!

Wel, that was just a few remarks, this is really enjoyable piece, dark as it should be ;)

A plus!

[Bessinnox]

Oups Sorry KAYAMB I have forgotten to thank you

I have changed the brass , tell me if it's better