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tchoyy
06-15-2005, 04:04 PM
Hi,

As a beginner, I do a lot of medieval/heroic fantasy compositions, this is the first style I've studied.

Now, I tried something different, something more ambiance and emotional, I would like some feedback knowing it's my first test.

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/david.chochoi/sad.mp3

Thanks

Raul_
06-15-2005, 05:00 PM
That Silver sounds realistic, well done ! I think this piece could be great in a dramatic/intimist movie.

Beach
06-15-2005, 05:03 PM
I agree with raul.
Beautiful composition. I like this genre of music.
My congratulations!
Sincerely,
Roberto

tchoyy
06-16-2005, 01:15 AM
Aie, this demo is not full, I think I had problems while uploading it !
It should play during at least 3min20...
I'll re-upload it at 12 o'clock (in France ;) ) so within 3 hours (caus' I'm at work)

tchoyy
06-16-2005, 04:27 AM
Ok, the full piece is now there, I re-uploaded it

http://perso.wanadoo.fr/david.chochoi/sad.mp3

Hope you'll appreciate ;)

tchoyy
06-17-2005, 04:27 AM
Other feedbacks ?

lgrohn
06-17-2005, 04:56 AM
Nice. But a little bit too slow, perhaps. Have you tried 3-6 notes quicker tempo per minute?

tchoyy
06-17-2005, 05:39 AM
Nice. But a little bit too slow, perhaps. Have you tried 3-6 notes quicker tempo per minute?

Maybe you're right, but I think that when it's slow, it can give more feelings, don't you think ?

lgrohn
06-17-2005, 05:48 AM
My guess is that slowness has per se nothing to do with feelings. Every piece has
its "natural tempo". Still different conductors sometimes use quite different tempos for the same piece...

ChrisE
06-17-2005, 08:26 AM
Nice work. I don't think the piece is too slow, it could do perhaps with some more movement within the piece. For instance when the harp comes in (just after 2 minutes), its nice to have that change of pace.

Still, its good as it is, and a great effort for a first time :D