Saying Hello- & asking for a critique!

[Onelight24]

Hello all, firstly I am glad to be part of this forum! Secondly, I was wondering if any of you would kindly give some thoughts on this composition! I am using Symphonic Gold, Symphonic Choirs, as well as, Stormdrum2!
Any thoughts on the realism would be greatly appreciated!

'No Promise'

http://www.reverbnation.com/tunepak/2562246

Thanks for your time!

Cheers,
Vincent!