Grace Fields

[Phill]

It is the day before I turn 18, the age many consider to be adulthood. However, before I do, allow me to share with you a piece of mine that is very incomplete.

A simple excerpt of this piece I hope will be nice to share. It might even be the last music you'll here from me on this forum, but who knows?

http://s373185814.onlinehome.us/phil...%20excerpt.mp3

Hopefully, this piece will be finished or worked further on when I have the time. The true reason I'm sharing is because it is the last personal piece worked on before adulthood.

Thanks to everyone on here for supporting, critiquing, tolerating, and befriending me.

[RozenHeim]

I love the rambunctious nature of the piano playing! Very nice I might experiment with some harp and flute accents to highlight the playful bounciness you've got going on with the piano.

[TGV]

Great start. I agree with RozenHeim on trying to accentuate the piano a bit, but I'd try with a slow high voice that plays a few gentle notes.

And congrats!

[tedreedy]

this is great! love the rhythms. the sound is so lush and expressive toward the end. well done man! happy birthday.

[Med8r]

I loved it, especially the bit with the pipes. As long as it eventually builds into something more, I don't necessarily think the piano needs to be accentuated in this bit. But perhaps as it keeps going (assuming you're going to continue this), it could be brought out a little, or even simply raised an octave...or even lowered. It would all depend on where you're trying to go with it, as each of those would create different mood suggestions.

If I were you, I definately wouldn't stop there. You've struck onto something great; I encourage you to run with it.