A surprise love (Electro Orchestra) (HS)

[Sherief83]

Hey Guys,

Thought I'd share this track I made last sunday. This one is less than 3mins this time..lol...Its about Intimacy.

The breathing sounds are a sound effect of someone that just ran but I edited them to match the rhythm and well.....

But in all seriousness. I'm was hoping to show Intimacy with Goosbumps but that was the attempt.

Thoughts on it are very welcome.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4Z0tfqExXo

[patsukos]

-Good work as always Sherief! I find the heavy breathing quite... intimate as you say and it serves your purpose just fine!
-On the other hand the perpetual, ever growing throughout the whole track breathing sounds a bit too"nervous" for my taste, and it distracts me from the rest of your music! Maybe a periodical re-occurrence of breathing in various "volumes" (pardon my English) and rhythmic patterns (triplets that slow down etc)? -But as I said before that is a matter of taste!
Again, good work worthy of its... title!

[Sherief83]

Thanks man! I Think I understand what your saying about the breathing...I thought about that, slowing it down and making it more variation but then it ended up sounding like the real thing...lol...So I kept it artistic and straight forward so you get the idea that I'm just following the rhythm of it and nothing more. Does that make any sense? anyway Thanks!

[Muziksculp]

Very Good !

I enjoyed listening to it.

I'm a big fan of hybrid (Orchestral + Electronic) music productions.

Thanks for sharing.

Muziksculp

[Sherief83]

Thanks Muzikscup! I love electro orchestra. I'm also obsessed with Dubstep lately as cheesy as it sounds, Hopefully I'll do something about it soon.

[Dean]

Hey,

interesting track,great job.i love the track up to :44, the beat kind of killed the mood and intimacy for me,(started to sound like Bjorks 'Venus as A Boy'.)
I think it would be more sensual without the driving beat,also i think if the breaths were on every second beat it would be sexier,(whats the rush?)

great job, Dean.

[Sherief83]

Thanks Dean, Interesting Observation. I had my speakers so loud so I was enjoying the loudness and thinking it would play nice in some club some where but that was just the day dream...lol Thanks again.

[musicbender]

Cool! Enjoyed the beginning for sure. I am sticking my toes in the water with this hybrid stuff, and this defiantly inspired me to go a little further. Very creative, dude!

[Sherief83]

Thanks Pat! I'm just like you, still new to the hybrid game but Its fun! The trick is to get to know how any synth works and have fun with all the available filters on whatever signal you want and how to control them. Thanks again!