Enemy

[MaJLo]

Hi there. I would likeshow you my first song . Takes only a minute, because the track was used to load the game. Waiting for your feedback and comments. Thanks in advance and best regards.

http://soundcloud.com/majlo17/majlo-enemy

[TGV]

Bit dry, and the ostinato is a rather repetitive, so the sooner the other instruments dominate, the better, but for the rest it's quite a good track for a loading game, especially towards the end. I like your mixing with synthetic/electronic elements, and the slightly dissonant melody lines. Could have a bit more variation in the bass line, and a more brassy horn sound, and perhaps a modulation or two.

[Harry Lightfoot Music]

Thanks for posting this piece of music.

I think it's nice, as a tense bed, but I'm with Theo with regards variation. I noticed there is no percussion. Was this deliberate? I think percussion will really bring this to life. Just my opinion!

[MaJLo]

Originally Posted by Harry Lightfoot Music

Thanks for posting this piece of music.

I think it's nice, as a tense bed, but I'm with Theo with regards variation. I noticed there is no percussion. Was this deliberate? I think percussion will really bring this to life. Just my opinion!

Thx for opinion. Harry yes this was deliberate. Could that be some variations. But as I wrote it is a short song of "loading up the game"

[Strezov]

Very synthetic strings - both the ostinato and the long patches. Try using some volume curves (CC#11 / CC#7 / both).
Cheers,
G.